That's it, I officially give up...

When it seems so dark, and feels so sad
When everything happens makes life so bad
Should I stop breathing, or shouldn't I care
But that's not right … it's so unfair
And everything screams come' on try, dare
Is it just me … or that's life; a huge nightmare
I can't believe it; it's like living in a big stupid lie
It takes you to the top, and makes you feel high
Then suddenly gets you down, and makes you wanna cry
But you have to fight, you have to try, you've got to be strong
You must prevent it from making your life so wrong
Don't lose the hope, don't become angry or mad
Pull yourself together, you have to understand
But I can't … it hurts … it's so damn hard
It strikes my soul, like a sword in the heart
Well it's life; a bunch of strange phenomena
To survive you must have some sort of stamina
Or you can just wait, watch and drink seven-up
Like an order to stay down, don't raise your voice, don't stand up
Stay calm … don't say a thing – in other words – shut your mouth up
I can't take it anymore, that's it, now I announce that I officially GIVE UP

Comments
jad Keep up the good work ; )
P.s: i cant believe ppl like u can Ever Give up !
Tcz ..
just want to remind u that u taught me to see the full half of the glass ... what happened ?
DO NOT surrender.
i hope so ;)
muna, that's so nice , but still i wanna remind u of something u said :
" everything is okay in the end ... if it's not okay , then it's not the end "
take care .
"don't struggle so much , best things happen when not expected " :)
bs la jad kteer 7elweh .
c ya
givin' up mo ma3natha beddi ante7er !!!!!
i'm still livin :))
as u all know , ana roo7 2albi el comments . bs ana 7abbeh a3raf ara2kom b my writing ya3ni bel poem - it's a poem btw -
thanks alot K.Sal , Seba , Razan and dodo .
when i read it,i felt that giving up is not an option..i believe that u have great potential and u won't give up so easily ...
just keep it on and try..
take care and good luck..